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Student 5A paper provided an introduction paragraph with the main themes that gave the reader an idea of the paper but did not include a title. The body paragraphs provided details on the main ideas, but the ideas needed to be expanded on. Student 5A failed to further explain “The Space Race” and J.F.K with complex information which left the reading, asking questions such as, who is J.F.K. Was he important? What is the space race? The student’s paper contained no spelling errors and wrote in complete sentences. Students of the fifth-grade level should be able to write a paragraph containing five sentences, but student 5A failed to demonstrate this skill. The student provided specific dates and a conclusion restating the main topics in the

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